His eyes followed her wrinkles, as deep as the Grand Canyon, recalling the birth of each one. Her milky eyes smiled at him for the millionth time and his heart leapt, yet again.
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This is for Trifextra; a 33 word story using a hyperbole. It was quite difficult! I scrapped about five thousand ideas and shot out curses that shuddered the walls before this came to be. Hope you like it.
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18/02/2013: Thank you Trifecta, this means a lot!
Sandra's scribbles 
Very nice!
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You rocked the house with this one!! Great job.
That’s me! Always ready to rock! 🙂 Thanks for your comment Lumdog.
Oh – that’s beautiful! xxoo
🙂 Thanks
Oh that’s beautiful Sandra! Great use of hyperbole!
I’m glad you enjoyed it Suzanne
Nice one. Beautiful in fact.
That is very kind of you Sandra.
Oh, so lovely! (:
Thanks Draug.
Aw 🙂
So sweet!
I don’t think I’d mind having wrinkles if they were likened to the Grand Canyon!
I MEAN THAT IN ALL HYPERBOLE.
Hehe! 🙂
Your writing is great! Very nice!
Thanks a lot, you are very kind to say so.
Aw, sweet
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This is so sweet. I’m getting wrinkles that size. It’s true, they can seem that big!
So am I, they keep getting deeper!!
This is great – reminds me of a happy couple in their later years
That’s what they are, a happy ending to a very long life of happily ever after 🙂
True love transcends all barriers-even wrinkles as deep as Grand Canyon;-)Excellent piece Sandra:-)
Your comment is a perfect complement to my story 🙂
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Congrats Sandra… this is a lovely Valentine.
Thanks a lot Ted 🙂