At the ‘Bwahhahhahhahha!!’ Mansion

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Copyright -Claire Fuller

‘What! They left already?’

‘Yup.’

‘What happened? Was it Peter with his drop-the-ball-down-the-stairs trick?’

‘No, it was Rose.’

‘Rose!’

‘You know how she gets when Carter floats to the attic to chat up the new ghost…’

‘And Rose got jealous?’

‘Yes. Freaked out.  All the lights went berserk.  The mortals thought that it was cos the house was old, but then Carter started dancing with the new girl.’

‘And Rose saw?’

‘Yes. She went mental.  Crockery started smashing against the walls. Then she started wailing … The whole family was out of the door before Carter gave the new girl a second twirl.’

When I first saw the picture posted by Rochelle for this week’s Friday Fictioneers, I was rushing out of work with my glasses already packed safely in my handbag.  I got a whole story going – title and all – by the time I got home.  Only now that I downloaded the picture have I realised that it is in fact a church. But the story was done by then and it refused to leave.  So there you have it and I hope you enjoy it.

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17 comments on “At the ‘Bwahhahhahhahha!!’ Mansion

  1. Sandra says:

    Lively then! Nice one.

  2. kz says:

    nice story. i love how the ghosts live on and get jealous like totally normal people.. ^^ ^^

  3. mtdecker says:

    It’s also fresh to see the ghost story from the ghost’s side. Bravo!

  4. The story refused to leave because it’s haunting you… Mwahahaha! I enjoyed it immensely!

  5. jwdwrites says:

    Great story Sandra, loved the idea of the ghostly quarrel. I am glad you didn’t rewrite. 🙂

  6. Church! Mansion! Who cares, it’s a great little story. Fun and funny. It’s nice that your spooks have human emotions.

  7. Jacey Faye says:

    I really enjoyed this. 🙂 It’s so nice to see things from the ghosts’ points of view, and the voices you gave them were fantastic!

  8. Many a church have been turned into a home. Thanks for sharing your vision.

  9. Dear Sandra,

    Hell hath no fury like a ghost-woman scorned. Good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  10. Ghosts are just humans after all (sorry were)

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